~ Sheila
North Carolina Mysteries
by Susan Whitfield
Let me begin by saying how much I appreciate Sheila Boneham
inviting me to guest on her blog. I met her last year at Cape Fear Crime
Festival in Wilmington and we were on a panel about book promotion. We found
that we’re kindred spirits in several ways: both writers, lovers of books and
animals, and residents of eastern North Carolina. Thanks again, Sheila, for the
friendship and support.
I wrote the bones of my first mystery, Genesis Beach, while I was still a high school principal,
occasionally pulling out a legal pad when I had hours between the end of the
school day and a meeting or ball game.
Genesis Beach was
my first attempt at writing, and I am here to tell you it was quite an
eye-opener for me. I’d taught English for thirteen years on the high school
level, making certain that students used correct grammar, spelling, and
punctuation at all times. I found that trying to write a novel that way made my
characters boring and the entire plot stilted and unbelievable. So I grabbed up
my many pages and trashed them. It hurt.
After a couple of soul-searching days of carrying ideas
around in my head, I started over. The experience was surreal. Logan Hunter, my
female protagonist, took over and words, phrases, and attitudes poured down my
arm, into my fingers, and appeared on the monitor. I wrote in a frenzied state
for hours and left the computer an exhausted but thrilled emerging writer. I
hope every writer out there has that kind of experience.
Genesis Beach is
about a young lady who decides to major in Criminal Justice and then applies
for the SBI, our equivalent to the feds. Part of her program requires an
internship, which she completes at Genesis Beach, where her mother lived until
she had a stroke. Logan moves into the old place, the beach right out her back
door. Her first three weeks at the police station are boring, but when a local
millionaire playboy is found dead in his hot tub, the chief of police and his
two officers, Max Cash and Logan Hunter, investigate. Even though the man has
no visible marks on him, Logan’s gut tells her he had help dying. Over the course of book, Logan uses her newly
acquired knowledge to search for a killer once the ME discovers internal
bleeding from trauma caused the death. She eventually catches the killer, of
course and by the end of the book I wanted to write more about Logan Hunter.
Since I’d set the novel along the Crystal Coast in a
fictitious beach town, I decided to take her to the mountains for the second
book. Just North of Luck
is set in Madison and Buncombe counties in western North Carolina. I upped the
ante by having Logan, now a full-fledged SBI agent, chase a serial killer. I
upped the ante for myself as well, beginning the book from the villain’s point
of view and hoping that readers would have a few sympathetic feelings about him
before being thoroughly creeped out later in the book. This book, in my
opinion, is by far the most graphically violent. Some of my friends and family
started looking at me in strange ways. My husband started telling folks he
sleeps with one eye open.
Wow! What an experience. While I was writing this book and
developing violent scenes, the villain lived inside my head. I must admit this
was a scary time. There were many nights that I didn’t sleep. I was so relieved
when I finished the book and he disappeared. <Is that a white van I see
pulling up to my house?> No, really, I suppose I had to get into a killer’s
head to write that kind of book, but never did I expect him to get into mine.
Even though the book sells as mystery, I think it should have been listed in the
horror genre. I never expected to write horror. I’m so glad Logan was there
with me to get me safely on the other side of the experience.
By this time, I was even more willing to write another Logan
Hunter mystery and hopefully tone it down a bit. I set Hell Swamp back in my native Pender County about four miles from my
childhood home. This mystery begins with Logan miffed at having to return to
work even though she’d taken off a few days to plan her wedding to Chase
Railey, another law enforcement officer. With some kind of major virus
circulating through the SBI, she begrudgingly reports to The Black River
Plantation to find the crime scene terribly compromised…an agent’s worst
nightmare.
When she pushes through the crowd and into the front foyer,
her eyes bulge at the carcass of a small woman, gutted like a deer, and hung
from the chandelier. <Yes, I know I said I’d tone it down, and I think I did
in this book. Once you get past this scene, things really do calm down a lot.
Trust me;-|>
Deer hunters are the prime suspects in Hell Swamp but
they’re closing the circle and trying to protect their own. Logan won’t be
getting any time off any time soon. Her fiancé, Chase Railey, comes in to help
her solve the case, but due to a misunderstanding, Logan doesn’t want him
there. The conflict is evident between them, Logan making Chase as
uncomfortable as she possibly can, However, Chase continues to work the case
and keep an eye on her.
I enjoyed writing this book because it brought back so many
childhood memories—great ones—and also provided me with an opportunity to write
conflict between two people who love each other. Trust became a major issue for
them to work through. By the end of the book—quite a shock to most readers—they
have made up, adopted a victim’s dog, and locked up the perps. Chase gives
Logan his mother’s wedding ring a few days before Christmas.
Sin Creek is the
fourth Logan Hunter mystery, set in Wilmington because I absolutely love that
place. I lived there for a year but cruised the streets all through my high
school years. I set most of the novel down by the Cape Fear River, where the
Riverwalk connects The Cotton Exchange to boutiques, restaurants, and
Chandler’s Wharf. In this novel, Logan is called to a gruesome scene where a
college freshman has been murdered. As she begins her investigation, she’s
pulled into the porn industry when she discovers the young girl had sex on film
in order to pay tuition and have an exciting and titillating nightlife.
There are several messages in this book, beginning with my
letter to readers at the front. My discomfort in writing such a book comes
through, I’m told. It was difficult to write, for sure, but I hope parents with
children heading to college will read it, not to scare them but to inform them
that there are many slime balls out there just hoping to hook up with the
naiive. This book was even more difficult because I killed off a character I
dearly loved. I cried over the pages many times while I worked to get it just
right. Another message in this book is about becoming an organ donor. I hope it
makes the reader at least think about recycling in the truest sense of the
word.
I’ve written a few pages in the next Logan Hunter mystery,
but it will be 2013 before I can say much about that one. It will be set here
in North Carolina, probably on the Inner Banks (IOX) somewhere. I have lots of
research to do. I enjoyed writing
women’s fiction and hope to write more of that as well. I’m also researching an
ancestor in hopes of writing an historical fiction.
Sheila, thank you again for showcasing my writing on your
new blog. I hope to see you soon.
Susan Whitfield, author
of the award-winning Logan Hunter
Mystery series, lives in
eastern North Carolina and sets her novels here. Susan has four published mysteries:
Genesis Beach, Just North of Luck, Hell
Swamp, and Sin Creek.
She has also compiled
recipes from mystery writers across the country for Killer Recipes. Proceeds from the cookbook are donated to cancer
research I honor of her grandson, a cancer thriver. Susan is an avid blogger
and promotes and interviews other authors on her site. Susan is letting her
first women’s fiction, The Goose Parade
of Old Dickeywood, “cure” for a few weeks before her last edit/rewrite. Then
she plans to begin the query process.
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Great interview. I like the fact that you have moved the setting for each book to a different part of the state. That is of particular interest to readers of stories set in a part of the country/world they have not seen personally. Tony Hillerman and Timothy Hallinan (his Poke Rafferty series set in Bangkok) come to mind. I also appreciate your sharing how you had to wrestle with the issues of violence and morality. I don't think a writer can avoid all things squeamish and still be authentic.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your mystery novels and recommend them to other readers. Congrats on your new book!
ReplyDeleteBerek, I love this state so much that is was important to me to showcase it. Thanks for the wonderful comparison to super writers, Hillerman and Hallinan. You're right. For those of us who write more graphically, we can't avoid violence and morals. Jacquie, as always, thanks for your suppot. I'm looking forward to reading your latest novel as well.
ReplyDeleteSheila, I'd like to mention that The Goose Parade of Old Dickeywood has been changed to Slightly Cracked, a title that seems to fit the story much better. Thank you so much for having me over. I hope we can meet for lunch one day soon.
ReplyDeleteSusan, I would love that! Let's try to set something up in June. (I rather like the Goose Parade!)
DeleteMaybe toward the end of June. We're over-run with weddings.
DeleteSusan, I enjoyed your interview. The first novel I wrote was actually my thesis for a graduate degree. When that was over, I realized how much it had to be changed to attract readers--English didn't have to be so concise, etc. In other words, the characters had to be REAL.
ReplyDeleteThanks again for an interesting discussion.
Betty, each book is a learning experience, isn't it? I don't like to read or write cookie-cutter-style, so I tr to challenge myself and my characters.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy having the writer take us to interesting places. Small towns are fine, but I do like it when we can see different scenery and see how that scenery plays into the story. Some locales are a character in themselves. Thanks for the trip.
ReplyDeleteI love reading books with strong settings, especially books set in places I've been. Your books sound interesting. Love the new title Slightly Cracked.
ReplyDeleteSetting is so much an additional character, Susan, and it rings loudly in your books!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great comments, you guys. It's been a pleasure to guest on Sheila's blog and she's coming over to mine later this year. Keep in touch.
ReplyDeleteSusan, thanks so much for being here! I hope you'll come back sometime.
ReplyDeleteSusan -- so interesting to hear about your process. It's such a wonderful breakthrough when the characters take over, isn't it?
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