We Murder in the
Country, Too
By C. Hope Clark
Classic
mystery takes place in the city. Thanks
to Raymond Chandler, Dashiell Hammett, Stieg Larsson, Sue Grafton, and the
grand majority of crime fiction writers, the setting automatically assumes to be
urban. Even Sara Paretsky, who broke ground for the female mystery sleuth, was
born on a Kansas farm, yet set her V.I. Warshawski series in Chicago. Why can’t
mysteries be as intriguing in a corn field, behind a barn, deep in the woods or
beyond civilization in some mountainous hills?
Per
a Wall Street Journal Health article titled “City vs.
Country: Who is Healthier?” the conclusion is that city dwellers eat and
exercise better, but those in rural settings endure less stress. Admittedly, a
higher concentration of humanity lends itself to more violent crime. Gangs
dominate dark, seedy sides of towns. Corruption runs amok. Hiding places exist
in subways, alleys, old buildings, warehouses, factories. Law enforcement is
complicated, segregated, competitive and untrustworthy. You find hordes of
people, and therefore, lots of bad sorts who can hide in plain view. And with larger
numbers of people living in cities than in the country, your reading public is
more likely to be urbane.
Technology
provides a larger impact on society in the city. While we are globally
connected thanks to electronics, you won’t find power grids a hundred miles out
in the middle of nowhere, and if electricity goes out, the gasps aren’t as
loud, the damage less effective. Terrorists don’t target the corn fields of
Nebraska.
As
a rural gal, I choose living on a lake in rural South Carolina from where I write
my mysteries. My stories do not take place amongst skyscrapers, and my readers
wouldn’t know how to hale a taxi. Actually, I prefer reading about people who
aren’t living in high rises, enduring honking, bumper-to-bumper traffic, and sucking
smog.
A
crime novel’s setting is a strong character in its own right. It impedes the
chase. It can ruin, expose, or even be a clue. With people’s reading taste
today so eclectic and desirous of new experiences, we can consider places
outside the city, and give readers exposure to unaccustomed dangers. Dangers
that can give readers pause, adding obstacles to crime solving they never knew
existed.
For
instance, deaths from traffic accidents are more common in rural areas. Speed
limits are higher, but there’s the issue of distance. Do you know what an antagonist
can do in that extra fifteen minutes it takes for police, fire or ambulance
services to arrive on the scene?
Take
that distance to another level. With protagonist pitted against antagonist in
the country, who will hear the call for help? In a city locale, the author has
to explain why pleas aren’t heard, but it’s understood that being confined two
miles from the next house or ten miles from town means screams don’t matter.
Flora
and fauna, the indigenous plant life and wildlife of a region, can make crime
solving not just formidable but dangerous. Poisons abound in those woods. Ask
any federal agent about castor beans and creating ricin. Eat one bean and
you’re dead. A 500-microgram dose of ricin, one that fits on the head of a pin,
will do you in. A baby food jar full of the stuff can kill a small town.
Tree
tobacco, yellow jasmine, oleander, and pokeberry are just a few poisonous
plants that grow naturally. As an agriculture major, I learned that a weed as
innocent as Johnson grass, that grows alongside every Southern field, contains
potent doses of cyanide during drought conditions.
Snakes,
bear, wild dogs, feral hogs, and venomous spiders are forces that can interfere
with the plans of the most attentive sleuth. Even whitetail deer can take down
a man or wreck a car, and a rabid raccoon is potentially lethal.
Politics
and bureaucracy are corrupt as much or more so, mainly due to the people in
power having a wider reach, and less competition. Also, country cops can only
cover so much ground. Cell towers aren’t as close. Simple lack of human,
emergency and electronic resources can mean the difference between cornering or
losing the culprit, convincing the authorities to assist or not, bleeding out
or saving a life.
Even
weather can be devastating and critical. Snow, tornadoes, torrential rains, and
drought can kill. In the city, who cares if it rains or if someone can’t find a
drink of water? If the car slides off the road, the average person calls Triple
A, or 911 sends a wrecker from around the corner and a cop from three blocks
over. Even if one’s cell phone is destroyed, a passer-by will take note. In the country, when you combine Mother
Nature with an immense list of obstructions that have amassed for the last ten
chapters, and then throw on the fact that nobody is around to help, you have
crisis that makes for great crime fiction.
I
set The Carolina Slade Series in rural reaches of South Carolina. Lowcountry Bribe ends in the secluded
confines of a tomato packing shed, deserted in the off season. Neighbors are
too far to see headlights, much less hear a scream. In Carolina Slade’s sequel Tidewater Murder, scheduled for early
2013, cat and mouse takes place on rural islands, in woods, along beaches, and
through thick overgrown forests of saw-tooth oaks, wax myrtles and pines. It’s
hard to just think of armed stalkers when you risk stepping on snakes and
gators.
Setting
can be as diverse and instrumental to the mystery genre as the range of crime
and antagonists. Time to break free of stereotypes. Nothing makes crime fiction
more fun than a stockpile of impossible. Rural settings have obstacles to spare.
Just because more readers live around concrete and steel doesn’t mean they
can’t appreciate country crime. They’ll never expect twists amidst such
bucolic, pastoral, Americana settings and laid back country people. It’s always
the quiet ones, you know.
Love talking about the country! Thanks for the posting opportunity! I've met many readers who adore the fact I ignored the city and took people outside of town. Hope your readers do, too!
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Glad you're here! Holiday traffic is a bit slow - all out in th country :-)
DeleteHope, you have been my heroine forever. I have received fundsforwriters, for many years. I welcome the opportunity to thank Sheila for having you write about different settings for mystery. The country life is a great setting for murder, mystery and mahem. Thank you both.
DeleteStella, thank you from stopping by. Hope Clark is an inspiration! I hope you'll come again.
DeleteI had agents and a couple of publishers turn up their noses at the setting, and the fact that something as "agricultural" was used as a backdrop. I investigated cases and hubby was a federal agent with Agriculture. Believe me, it gets weird!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kudos, Stella! Hopefully we can meet at a conference sometime. I love meeting FFW readers at conferences, as well as Carolina Slade readers!
Thanks for this post. This was inspiring. I grew up in a small village surrounded by rural townships in Southwestern, PA. I remember stories, landsxape, and vegitation that would be the backdrop for many good mystery and other tales.
ReplyDeleteValerie
Hope, I adored Lowcountry Bribe! The setting was so much more than just added flavor. It added layers and a richness that made your story something too tasty to savor--I devoured it in five hours! Can't wait for the sequel!
ReplyDeleteJennifer
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind! Those words would look awful pretty up on Amazon or Goodreads!
Thanks, Hon.
Hope
I've been meaning to do that... :)
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