Confessions of an Out of Control Author
by
Laurien Berenson
I can’t control my characters. There, I’ve said it. I
feel much better now. I have no idea how this happened. Maybe it was when they
began to seem more real to me than some members of my own family? Or perhaps
when I began to wonder what they were doing when I put the book aside and went
away?
I write a cozy mystery series about a woman named Melanie
Travis. She’s a busy person: a mother, a teacher, and a breeder and exhibitor
of Standard Poodles. I began the series with what was meant to be a small,
manageable, cast of continuing characters. There was Melanie, her young son,
Davey, and her formidable Aunt Peg, the dog show doyenne whose dead husband and
missing champion stud dog were the focus of A PEDIGREE TO DIE FOR, the series
debut. Melanie and I have been together for sixteen books now and in that time,
her entourage has grown exponentially. Not only that, but somewhere along the
way I’m pretty sure that I lost control of her life.
A writer should start with a plan, right? An outline or
synopsis would be great, but even the most disorganized among us can come up
with a general idea of where the plot might reasonably be expected to go. And
yet somehow, I’m always finding myself taking unanticipated detours. I’ve been
writing these characters for years and the longer I know them, the less they feel
inclined to listen to me. I’m pretty sure that there’s something wrong with
that system.
In my new book, GONE WITH THE WOOF, Aunt Peg introduced
me to a character whose existence I’d never previously suspected. And once she
arrived on the scene, that new character quickly became integral to the plot. In
other books, characters have gotten pregnant, quit jobs, and broken up
relationships, all without my prior permission. And don’t even get me started on
their penchant for road trips! These are all life—and series—changing events.
So how is it that I never see them coming? And why can’t I do anything to rein
those people in?
Each time I start a new book, I purposely introduce a
handful of new characters whose problems
and dramas will form the nucleus of that book’s plot. I fully expect those
characters to do what they need to do, then go away quietly at the end. But often
they refuse to do so. Even though I’m quite certain their roles are finished,
they somehow manage to hang around and pop up again in later books. In this
fashion, Melanie has gained a husband, a new sister-in-law, and a gay friend
who makes me laugh every time he appears on the scene. For some reason, these
characters are determined to be part of the series’ larger story. And faced
with their firm resolve to remain involved in Melanie’s journey, how can I say
no?
I have to confess there are times when I find this trend a
little alarming. Especially on those occasions when my characters reveal unexpected
tidbits of information that send the plot spinning in a whole different
direction. How do they do that? How do they know what to say? I’d like to
believe that it’s my subconscious mind at work but, sadly, I’m afraid that’s
not what’s going on.
My
characters are beginning to think for themselves.
Pretty soon they’ll hardly need me at all. I’ll simply be
their scribe, the only person in the vicinity who has fingers to hit the keys.
Thank God I have the opposable thumbs. Otherwise it might just be chaos around
here.
Laurien
Berenson is the author of twenty eight
novels that have sold more than a million copies worldwide. Her current
mystery series revolves around the world of dog shows, a mileu she knows well
as her family has been involved in the sport of dogs for three generations.
There are now sixteen Melanie Travis canine mysteries, the latest of which,
GONE WITH THE WOOF, comes out this month.
Berenson
is a four time winner of the Maxwell Award for Fiction from the Dog Writers
Assoc. of America and a winner of the Romantic Times Reviewer’s Choice
Award. She is also an Agatha and Macavity nominee. Her work has appeared in The New York Times as well
as numerous magazines. She is a graduate of Vassar College, and she and her
husband live on a farm in Kentucky, surrounded by horses and dogs.
Her
website is www.laurienberenson.com and she loves making friends on Facebook.
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Please come back Monday for Part 2 of "A Synergy of Image, Text, and Dogs" ~ see Part One here. And in the meantime, why not scroll back through some of the previous posts? August has been Dog Days, July focused (loosely) on history, and June was covered in cats! ~ Sheila
There's not much that irks me more than a good author with a potentially good storyline who ruins it by shoving a gazillion un-fleshed-out and less-than-memorable characters down our throats. Good thing we don't have to worry about that with Ms. Laurien!
ReplyDeleteI love the characters woven in this series. While I like Melanie I worship Aunt Peg and squeal for pretty but not so smart Tar. To the point I forget they won't be at my next dog show. The way the books are written it makes it wasier to follow and the next book is not jarring as characters orbit in and out and have a backstory. It adds to the books character.
ReplyDeleteStandard poodles!! I confess that I've seen your name for years but never read your books, but I'm quickly fixing that gap right now. I have a labradoodle who's "much more doodle than labra" as his book alterego puts it.
ReplyDeleteGreat post. As for those characters who get out of control: perhaps a clicker and some really good treats? :)
Clicker training for the characters, lol! I hadn't thought of that. Although maybe that would simply reinforce their own belief in their existence?
ReplyDeleteLaurien, you're the writer that made me get over my aversion to poodles. ;-) I've read the entire series and can't wait for this next installment. IT's been WAY TOO LONG. Welcome back.
ReplyDeleteI will definitely find one of your books. I love the idea of your characters speaking to you. I have found as I write, things take a turn I hadn't expected. That's the fun of creating The Story!! Enjoyed your interview. Thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteLove, love, love your books and have read them all. I have always suspected that Aunt Peg was bossing you around and writing her own stories. You have now confirmed it. Give Peg her head and let her run!
ReplyDeleteSonesta, Aunt Peg has been in charge all along. And she never lets anyone forget it for a minute.
ReplyDeleteMy characters have always had their say. It's what I love about them. Your books sound delightful!
ReplyDeleteLaurien,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great reminder to get back to reading your books!
Marilyn, there's a new one coming in a few days. You might want to try that one.
ReplyDeletePhoebe, thank you!